What does your story have which is good?

Hello,this will tell you some tips if you want to have a good story but remember not every story has all these things but you might want to take some.So enjoy reading through things that are good for your story. .You might want to use a adverb for your opener or you can call it an ly opener because it ends in ly. E.G. Suddenly I saw him standing in the night shadows looking at the dark; gloomy Thames. .Try and use good punctuation so not only . and ABC so maybe you want to use this punctuation in the e.g. ! ? , ; : ( ) " " - / ' , , .Your openers need to be good so don't just use the. Try and start with time,date,adverbs,adjectives or speech. e.g. suspiciously;in the year of 2012; "Help me!" and others like that. .Use paragraphs (leave a line) when the time;place;topic or person changes. e.g.I really wanted to go outside so I bravely went downstairs to my mum. "Mum can I go outside?" I questioned loudly and clearly. .You might want to use VCOP which stands for Vocabulary,Connectives,Openers and Punctuation. Also you might want to use adjectives,adverbs,verbs and similies. I hope these tips helped.